Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Critique of Abdullah's People of UTSA pictures


I discussed with yousef  fawilkawi about his photos. He blogged 5 photos.  All his 5 photos are beautiful photos. Most of his photos were ladies so I asked him why all your pictures are girls. He said, it was by accident. 

Picture#1
My critique of Yousef in his first picture is great photo shot. The objects of the color are good too. Probably needs to zoom in littlie bet so, the picture will be more professional. Also, his focused was good. It was in the face and the background is unfocused.

Picture#2
My critique in his second pictures mostly not that bad picture. The picture again is focused in her face and background is unfocused which make the pictures more beautiful. 
The position that he took the picture was good. So it makes the photo more bigger and as I said before professional.


Picture#3
The picture is good shot. Again Yousef like to play for focused for all his pictures. I think he needs to decrease to green color just a littlie bet in the Photoshop. Also, if he asked the girl not too smile, the picture will be more serious. However if all of them were smiling it will be more happens and I believe he should told all of them to smile because it is a part of photo. 


Picture #4  (spontaneous)
I like this picture the most. Why I like it the most because this picture has spontaneous in her face. Again, Yousef worked a good job in focusing as we can see the sign is unfocused which make the picture beautiful. Also, about the levels in the colors if he decreases the green just littlie it will be brighter.
   

Picure#4
The shot of the picture was great. He needs to work in his position sometimes. Because when I just focused in the picture, I saw the picture little bet rotate in the left. So he needs to rotate the picture just little in the right. Again the focused is good in the picture. Also, he needs to put more green in this picture to make it brighter. 

Monday, October 14, 2013

assignment 3

 
Joaquin:
“if you were asked to give advice to a large group of people, what would you say?
You can succeed in life if you, can think you, can! 




 
Brant:
“What is your greatest achievement?
Never getting difficult controlling my life.
“Is there any thing going on currently in your life that you are excited about?
It’s almost Friday.



 
“Is there any thing going on currently in your life that you are excited about?
Going to Austin for the weekend!!
“What experience in life has taught you the most?
Starting architecture school.





 
Lindsey Gonzales:
“What is your greatest achievement?
Giving birth to my son.
“What is your saddest moment in your life?
When my dog died !!






Jem:
“What is your greatest achievement?
When I started Playing guitar.